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katie
Mar 22, 2009 15:02:21 GMT -5
Post by firestorm on Mar 22, 2009 15:02:21 GMT -5
Name: katie Gender:feamale Age: 13 Pack: pack 4 if they allow me Family/Relations Father: smerk Mother: snow she wolf Siblings: aluet, and rei Mate/Crush: none Description a white and tan she wolf with black paws Appearance Eyes: blue Nose: black Claws/Paws: black Other/Accessories: a small silver chain around neck that no one can really see Image of your character: farm1.static.flickr.com/97/279185779_79626fa112.jpgTheme song: Disturbia Personality: katie is shy but won't give up a argument or fight that easily Fears: fears nothing except being caught and losing her family Likes: running Weaknesses: blood Powers: killing people Secrets:none Livelong wish: to be free forever and not be caught Ambitions:to defend her family history:katie was born in the mountains with her 2 sisters and were left alone when there parents moved into the city the three sisters left the mountains to go live with pack 4 Role-play Example. katie walked up to alute with a rabbit in her jaws she put the rabit down and said looks like you almost got yourself killed in the market again i find it very funny that you can't get any food shepicks the rabbit up again ans trotts off Description: katie is shy, calm, and strong spirited Hair colour: brown Description of your characters cloths (in human form): in human form she wears a purple shirt with blue jeans on Eye colour: blue
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Aluet
Dreamer
Don't give me a reason to hurt you.
Posts: 127
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katie
Mar 22, 2009 15:08:54 GMT -5
Post by Aluet on Mar 22, 2009 15:08:54 GMT -5
You miss spelled Aluet and smerk is SMIRK in the RP example, forgot quotaion marks, and forgot to use capitals.
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Evkav
Non-believer
I will never stop searching for Paradise
Posts: 43
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katie
Mar 23, 2009 4:30:05 GMT -5
Post by Evkav on Mar 23, 2009 4:30:05 GMT -5
yeh also you might need to put in a longer role-play example im not an admin but just incase it would be good to make the example a bit longer go pack 4!!
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katie
Apr 5, 2009 17:07:23 GMT -5
Post by Paw_ on Apr 5, 2009 17:07:23 GMT -5
sigh, you two... your fine in pack 4, not a problem, and they were right. however, you should make the roleplay to make use say your character is great. sorry for being harsh that i am. to say the least, your in pack four.
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